The lingering

The unexpected arrived in a thunderstorm
brightening the middle
of a story lingering,
waiting to be told.

the lingering

7 thoughts on “The lingering”

Erika Kind says:

April 14, 2017 at 3:53 am

Very lovely!

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1. Mim - My Island Home says:
  
  April 14, 2017 at 7:59 pm
  
  Thanks Erika 😀
  
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  1. Erika Kind says:
    
    April 15, 2017 at 5:13 am
    
    😊😊
floridaborne says:

April 17, 2017 at 5:12 pm

I love the picture of the cliff at the top.

I can feel the lingering in your poem. Is there a story about it coming forth?

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1. Mim - My Island Home says:
  
  April 19, 2017 at 3:44 pm
  
  Thanks for the feedback – this wasn’t part of a story, but perhaps it should be 🙂
  
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thereluctantpoet says:

April 26, 2017 at 12:08 am

MIm, this was such an elegant and beautiful piece! Love the bit of mystery, intrigue and expectation you wove into this – Nicely done. “The unexpected arrived” – who? What? A lingering story waiting to be told? Now you have us all waiting to find out how your story “unfolds”? Kudos.

Thank you for visiting and following my blog! I do hope you will find it worthy of your time! I am looking forward to following you too. So nice to meet new friends!!

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1. Mim - My Island Home says:
  
  April 26, 2017 at 7:55 pm
  
  Thank you. It is funny the comments from people wanting to know more. I in fact do not know more. Much like life, these things will show themselves over time. I am pleased to meet another wonderful writer too! Thank you for visiting 🙂
  
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